Natalee+Schiavoni



Poets are soldiers that liberate words from the steadfast possession of definition. ~Eli Khamarov,  The Shadow Zone

Poetry (ancient Greek: ποιεω (poieo) = I create) is an art form in which human language is used for its aesthetic qualities in addition to, or instead of, its notional and semantic content. It consists largely of oral or literary works in which language is used in a manner that is felt by its user and audience to differ from ordinary prose. - http://www.poetry.org/whatis.htm

Memory poem
 When it happens you wish it never did  It comes in the blink of an eye  Its thrill starts to rush  and you head begins to beat

 It came by me so fast  and it flew right past me head  yes It was something I could never forget  and something I'll never regret  so happy I had that chance

Comment:  It was good, I think it has alot of emotion but I'd like to see alot more senses involved in your poem to make it more bolder and abled to captivate the readers attention. - Cheyenne Pegan

 Great use of language. Caught my attention in the first line. - Khalil Clark

<span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">"Ode to an Escape"
<span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> By Natalee Schiavoni

<span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> your the way to the other side <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> a grip so bare, the touch so cold <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> new things to see <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> your the way out

<span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> Blinded by the sight <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> the tunnel to the end of the light <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> helping me get through <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> the wood that holds you together <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> keeping privcay in <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> and a way for me out <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> an escape

<span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">Riff - Opening line (lyrics from Carrie Underwood- you won't find this)
<span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> You won't find this <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> this bond we have for each other <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> lies were told and heard by a ears that waits <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> for what it wants to hear <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> feed me the attention I want from you <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> but your walking the other way <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> sometimes I blame myself <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> for the words your afraid to say <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> tell me whats on your mind <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> is it the game you like <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> or my hopes almost reaching the sky <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> your own insecurities eat you alive <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> why put pain in front of something your going to miss <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> remember what you have <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> and what you don't <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> then think about what you want <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> before I'm halfway out the door = = =<span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">Elizabeth Barrett Browning =

<span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">By: Natalee Schiavoni
<span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> I was raised by <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> Loud talking <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> hand moving <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> always cooking <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> kind of woman

<span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> smaller then most <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> warm hearted <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> just like her coffee <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> 1930s born <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> kind of woman

<span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> independent and strong <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> always the hand to hold <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> cry on my shoulder <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> everything going to be alright <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> when your by my side <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> kind of woman

<span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">Sonnet
<span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> in the back of my head are the imagines that left a thread <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> of darkness so deep in <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> that its so hard to get myself out of it <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> why do this to someone so innocent <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> the affect like an after shock <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> and the only sign for luck would add up to death

<span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">A written analysis of your own poetry: <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> My poetry I would say actually amounts to most of my feelings. I like to add my emotions and expressions into my writings because I feel it puts a bit of myself in each poem. I feel as if while reading my poems you will actually be abled to feel a little bit of the same emotions I was feeling during the time. Using a lot of imagery frequently shows up in same of my poems because I feel it gives it more of the poetic flow and a better understanding of my writing. The pauses and commas also bring a greater understanding of the emotion that is try to make a point across with problems that accrue in today's society

<span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">Written analysis of poet: <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;"> Elizebeth Barrett Browning is a very resourceful poet to research about

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